Friday, July 11, 2008

Rhythm

He said

"Don't...ignore me." She said

"Don't...forget me." He said

"Try not to hurt me." She said

"I guarantee nothing." He said

"Please don't confuse me." She said

"It isn't my fault." They said

"Don't throw it away." We said

"All together."

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Whoa.

There's something of a slam poet potentiality in you, good sir.

Anonymous said...

I wish I could write dialogues better... but you are really good at them. This piece was short, to the point, and downright good.

You know who I am.